with Scott Mitchell
The words just capture the moment.
Thanks! It was my first Haiku. I analyzed some on the site of LScott Poetry until I felt ready to write one and it just came out as what you see here🙂
For more (and better) Haikus, as well as awesome poetry, visit her at:
Yes, her poetry is deep and amazing!
Scott, this is absolutely beautiful…your words, the perfect image and so many meanings in these few syllables; an awesome first haiku and I can’t wait for more from you! And you completely caught me off guard by paying me this HUGE complement! Thank you so much! I am no expert on any type of writing, let alone haiku, and to think you were analyzing mine? Wow, I’m stunned and honored…big hugs and thank you again, my friend! xx
Hey Lauren, it’s comment catch up day for me😀
Thanks for always being here commenting and for sharing your own amazing work/heart always on your blog. Stay blessed forever
How do I begin to apologise for my silence…. ‘Don’t think I have done much reading in a while either😦
I have A LOT of catching up to do….. but I guess this is a start🙂
How have you been you?🙂
Hey, life happens and we get busy. Very understandable and the same happens to me too often🙂
I’m doing very well, thanks. I hope you are well and always hope to see you writing again!
The image..!!!. Is a poem/story on its own…🙂
Thanks Maureen! I did spend a great deal of time trying to find the perfect image to match what I was saying. I found almost the perfect one and edited it🙂
‘Glaze of spring fragrance …’ how lovely
Thank you Polly. I’m not sure if anybody ever writes romantic haikus, but the secret in this one is that it’s slightly romantic.
I just think it’s beautiful and the photo is so pretty too – I love it that we’re not sure if anybody writes romantic haikus, why not? I say. Have you seen the Spanish form called Shadorma? Stanza’s of six lines (sestets) with no set rhyme scheme. Thought to be a variation of haiku, which is clear from its syllable pattern – you’re good at this Scott, take a look at the Shadorma🙂
Beautiful🙂 Thank you for sharing
Thanks Crystal! I appreciate your visit and comment!
Thanks Celeste!! Blessings
Just passing along this info to all my ABC Award nominees..….I think it’s a great idea, I have already joined! See you there!
~ Celeste ~
Congratulations on your ABC Award!
As the originator of this award you may be interested to know that I have now set up a Facebook group for all bloggers who have been given the ABC Award – a place for you to meet new bloggers, and share and support each other. You can join the group here:
Please also let any other bloggers, that you know have been given the award, know about this group too – then we can all ‘spread the word’
I have also set up a Facebook page – the ABC Award – where you can now add links to all of your blog posts and writing – share your work with a new audience, gain new readers, and find out what other ABC Award bloggers are writing about.
You can find the page here:
Just ‘like’ the page and get started – and do let all your blog readers know about this page – I believe that all of our blogs can only be improved by letting our readers know about other blogs – that way you will also have new readers discover you too!
Happy blogging – and congratulations again on the ABC Award – you’re awesome!
thanks! I joined the group. It’s a good idea there
I can’t help wondering if your twitter post and this poem are related..both are lovely🙂
Sometimes I think you know me too well Lenise🙂
Thanks for the comment!
That is just beautiful, Scott!
Hugs to ya! xx
Thanks Debbie! I always need the hugs😀
Hugs back to you!
spring time; new beginning. Short and sweet. Beautiful Scott! Awesome picture.
Thanks Shian! Yes, spring time. I was thinking about human natures and spring time while having lunch. Maybe this is why I feel like writing something new every hour (but been resisting)🙂
Write write as much as you can. Your muse is whispering in your ears.
Thanks ever so for the like! Your blog is lovely!!!! Jen🙂
Thanks Jen. Very much appreciate your visit and comment! Have a great weekend!
Thank you Sarah Jane! Glad to see you here. Just like old times😀
Have a great weekend and I hope all is well there
Thanks. Well, this week I did my first sonnet and my first haiku. I feel productive😀
Absolutely… I did my first Haiku this past week too🙂
Very nicely done Haiku!! I like it !
Thank you! I thought I already replied to this, but came back to catch up and see I didn’t haha. Hugs
Thanks Dave! I appreciate your visit
Thanks ellibloo! after reading a couple of your poems yesterday and today I realized I need to follow. You’re a awesome writer!
Thank you very much. It takes one to know one!🙂
That’s a great first attempt if you ask me.
Lovely Haiku Scott😉.
Thanks Sherline! Stay blessed and have a great weekend!
Sweet! The image gives double the impact of the words!
hey thanks Wendell! No new poem from you today? whatup??🙂
Yea, I love using images on almost everything here. Sometimes I’m not sure if everyone can see the relation, but I’m quite sure you always can
Words perfectly distilled into images!🙂
Thanks! Hey, I’ve been trying to figure out why your blog title rings such a bell with me and it finally hit me😀
The movie A River Runs Through It. Hmm, I think that was the name. Anyway, love your blog and thanks for the visit!
Thank you guttermutt!🙂
I so miss reading your poetry and must say love it and the image goes well! Thank you for sharing! God Bless🙂
aww thanks PJ!! I’m always so happy to see you commenting here. God bless you forever, friend
It’s nice to evolve.. HUGS🙂
Thanks Simona. Yes, change is good, especially when we can see the beauty in it
your poetry always amuses me. And this one is great! Mind blowing concept and words!
Thanks! That’s an incredible compliment and much appreciated
I could see bronze wings on the back of my mind!😉
Thanks Nanda! Your mind is always soaring as a beautiful butterfly. I can see it in your writing! Hugs
Thanks Madhu! Hope you are well there and being blessed
Hi Scott. I just nominated you for a Sunshine Award, though I didn’t have the new web address. Will fix that!
Thank you so so much Lisa! It’s such an honor receiving such an award!
You are very welcome!
Magical words and image.
Reblogged this on LSCOTT POETRY and commented:
I couldn’t help sharing this beautiful spring haiku from one of the best poets I’ve met on WP. Scott has a romantic heart and a gentle spirit and I’m honored to “know” him!🙂
Thanks again Lauren!
I really, really love this photo. 😀
Thank you! Hey I’m following you now on tumblr. I just have to get more familiar with tumblr. It’s a little different than what I’m used to but I’ll get it figured out🙂
Delicate, lovely picture. Thanks for visiting my blog too.
Thank you Libby!
Challenge you to a Lucky 7 MEME Challenge
Sorry, it took time for me to pass on. Have fun.🙂
Hey thanks! Hmm a challenge. I rarely resist a challenge😀
I’ll have to check that out and hopefully have time soon to fulfill it
Good to know you are a sport! Take your time Scott.🙂
lovely haiku…and stunning photo (that light!!!)
Thank you Michelle. I found that photo on bigstock.com. When I need a different kind of pic for something published I love bigstock because of the selection and it’s only a few dollars.
Lovely! I’m glad Lauren re-blogged it.🙂
Thank you for the visit Betty. I love Lauren’s writing and was honored to have her repost
I wanted to let you know that I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award! You can see the post here: http://shianwrites.wordpress.com/2012/04/26/versatile-blogger-award/ Congratulations! Here’s the website if you want more info on your award: http://versatilebloggeraward.wordpress.com/
Thank you sooo much Shian! You know you’re one of my favorites and being awarded from you is the utmost compliment and inspiration for me to continue on my blog. I appreciate you! God bless always my friend
I so so so so SO can’t do haiku!! I admire you for it. But that picture. It is fantastic. I am just amazed on wordpress what I’m being exposed to. about once a week I go cruising sites & tags, & see some awesome stuff. Love the photography that goes on. This though, was like a very neat package🙂
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Thanks! It was my first haiku. When I see your writing I really believe you could do haikus. Seriously🙂
Excellent first attempt, Scott! I really love it.
wonderful!! the poem and the image!
Thanks Mimo. I wish I had your talent so I could have my own library of amazing photos that I took myself so I could use them🙂
Such overwhelming beauty, Scott!😀
Hi Scott, I learnt of your blog from GG’s Blog: http://gagangupt16.wordpress.com/. You are in his, “About Some of the Fantastic blogs I have came across…” He wasn’t kidding. My, this poem is beautiful! I’m looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
Reblogged this on The Written Blit and commented:
What an awesome haiku!
The last line evoked so many thoughts with me (I guess that’s why the site is called ‘evoking the deep’). The wings could be golden, platinum, magical – instead they are bronzed. I wonder if it’s a literal image or if the poem hints of greater things to come from the newly emerged creature familiarizing itself with the world.
For me it meant a few things. Even literally bronzed🙂
Sorry for my late reply as I’ve had a difficult few months. Thanks so so much for your comment!
Ah… no words for this!!
Now am wondering why I had taken so long to be here.
And I take a deep breath of appreciation again. Thanks so much silentfingers!
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