Grinning as you sip your tea
near an ocean of blue
Anticipating dusk with me
knowing all I crave is you
The music is starting
like a warriors drum
My heart is thrashing
my reservations numb
Your lips of an angel
eyes beaming fire
Feel me approach
my muse, my desire
An anticipated predator
I’ll drink every ounce
No resistance given
yet a scream when I pounce
I’ll give you my all
nothing to fear
With each withdrawal
as you pull me near
I’ll eat your heart
and remove your pains
Now I’ll always be part
like blood in your veins
You can still feel my bite
in the peaceful morning sun
We cut an oath in the night
you’re my goddess of love
– Scottula
Happy Halloween
Evoking the Deep 
October 10th, 2011 at 11:04 pm
My goodness. I am speechless. Finally
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October 10th, 2011 at 11:08 pm
extremely erotic if i may say so…
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October 10th, 2011 at 11:17 pm
Tis the season 🙂
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October 10th, 2011 at 11:24 pm
I can only say . . . you are incredible. I’m getting so I can’t wait for your next post.
Your lips of an angel
eyes beaming fire
Feel me approach
my muse, my desire
OMG. That is delicious. Love the whole post.
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October 10th, 2011 at 11:37 pm
My goodness Scott, this is so sensual and beautiful. You are really good at writing poems.
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October 11th, 2011 at 12:37 am
just amazing
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October 11th, 2011 at 1:42 am
So tantalizing! 😉
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October 11th, 2011 at 3:07 am
Love this!!!
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October 11th, 2011 at 8:02 am
i can see it, i can feel it. i love it, love it, love it!!
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October 11th, 2011 at 8:36 am
Love it, especially the line saying ” I’ll eat your heart and remove your pains” nice!
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October 11th, 2011 at 10:36 am
Congratulations, your really sank the teeth into it 🙂
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October 11th, 2011 at 10:53 am
Fantastic poem 🙂
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October 11th, 2011 at 10:55 am
Interesting, i’ve gain one or two things to improve on my blog, more of that man.
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October 11th, 2011 at 11:38 am
Kind of amazing!
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October 11th, 2011 at 2:12 pm
Passionate with a touch of erotica.
Lovely.
Lady Nyo
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October 11th, 2011 at 3:30 pm
Scott, This is a very beautiful poem! pretty hot and heavy, oow-la-la!, lol. Great job. Blessings, Terri
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October 11th, 2011 at 3:35 pm
quite intense!
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October 11th, 2011 at 6:08 pm
I loved this poem especially, “I’ll eat your heart
and remove your pains
Now I’ll always be part
like blood in your veins” What awesome phrasing. Well done!
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October 11th, 2011 at 8:19 pm
Amazingly intense! Love it!
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October 11th, 2011 at 10:22 pm
Thanks everyone for the feedback. You are all putting out some amazing posts that inspire me always and I’m always learning about the world and your thoughts.
Blessings always
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October 11th, 2011 at 10:23 pm
Beautiful…but I was scared. It is the first thing of yours I’ve ever read. So I was relieved when I came to the Happy Halloween at the end, and now know that you are truly not a vampire. 😉 Dark, alluring, and romantic…like it!
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October 11th, 2011 at 11:26 pm
I loved how the poem depicted serenity in the beginning then like flowing against the currents, all the passion swam with verve and strength…all the while in a beautiful infusion of what desire and devotion means.
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October 12th, 2011 at 11:27 am
Absolutely love it! So erotic and deep.
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October 12th, 2011 at 11:41 am
I really love how you write!
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October 12th, 2011 at 12:16 pm
awesome poem… i loved it
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October 12th, 2011 at 5:44 pm
Wow! This must be what the popularity of all that vampire fiction is about. You describe yourself as a romantic on your about page, Scott, and indeed…!
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October 13th, 2011 at 3:29 am
Bloody hot! 🙂 lovely as well.
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October 13th, 2011 at 9:56 am
That was EXTREMELY erotic!… Wow!
Hhhhappy Hhhhhaaaaalloween! 😀
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October 13th, 2011 at 11:13 am
Hi, Scott, I’m just returning the visit. :p
Seems like you’re quite a poet yourself.
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October 14th, 2011 at 4:23 pm
hmm – beautifully passionate and yes – i can still feel the bite…I’ll eat your heart and remove your pains..goodness…like the vampire play in this
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October 15th, 2011 at 11:04 am
between monitoring
the lavish
swooning and
rare moments of
clarity, they all
agreed that proper
etiquette calls for
gargling at least
twice, if
not three times,
a night. there were,
however, no clause
in the vampire
handbook
about lust
nor deception
.
20111015:1058
y
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October 15th, 2011 at 11:05 am
[…] monitoring the lavish swooning and rare moments of clarity, they all agreed that proper etiquette calls for gargling at least […]
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October 16th, 2011 at 12:12 pm
man you’re a star!
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October 16th, 2011 at 11:58 pm
Awesome.
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October 18th, 2011 at 7:58 am
this is more than amazing!
blew my mind!
i wish i could inspire someone like this… 🙂
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October 18th, 2011 at 3:09 pm
Now that is something I can sink my teeth into..absolutely loved it!
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October 18th, 2011 at 3:10 pm
Excellent X 3!!! Loved it…..the imagery stimulated a cascade of wonderful memories for me, yet still kept root in the present. Great work…..can’t wait for the next….
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October 19th, 2011 at 4:09 pm
The raw passion – felt in every movement. Brilliant!
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October 21st, 2011 at 5:10 pm
“feel your bite” – good one, Scottula
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October 21st, 2011 at 10:56 pm
I love this. I love it very much. Thank you for this great read. Keep writing.
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October 22nd, 2011 at 9:15 am
The picture is chilling.. i love this poem. :-D.. its so different, yet still carries the romance factor.
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October 23rd, 2011 at 2:37 pm
Great imagery… makes me want to be wanted.
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October 23rd, 2011 at 5:39 pm
Awesome!
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October 23rd, 2011 at 7:21 pm
I like your style Scott
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December 1st, 2011 at 11:56 pm
I love this piece… it’s different but the intensity of each lines still awesome…
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