Oh mi amor,
where are you this lonely night
Empty and alone,
I tremble with necessity
My vacant arms,
feeling void of life
One wish,
on a falling star to bless me
~
Your arrival,
hearts suddenly a bliss
Alluring body,
I can’t resist to hold
Hearts pounding,
we share an awaited kiss
Passions flare,
and I soon forget the cold
~
Eyes gazing,
as I’m lifting up your dress
Accepting me,
surrender to strong embrace
Your soft voice,
motivation as I press
Until dawn,
with a moon inspired pace
~
~
Scott Mitchell
Evoking the Deep 
October 6th, 2011 at 2:10 pm
Yet again I am there in the room, you transport the reader.
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October 6th, 2011 at 2:17 pm
Passionate and beautiful. Your words touched me, so romantic, so erotic. I like it very much.
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October 6th, 2011 at 3:04 pm
Very very well written. I especially like the part that says ‘passions flare, and I soon forget the cold.’ Cheers to you for another great piece of work!
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October 6th, 2011 at 4:26 pm
This is lovely and full of passion. I love it.
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October 6th, 2011 at 5:27 pm
Fabulous mood you’ve (re?)created here.
“with a moon inspired pace” – a brilliant line of poetry. Wow.
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October 6th, 2011 at 7:04 pm
another beautiful poem. full of wonderful passion.
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October 6th, 2011 at 8:47 pm
is very good, I really admire you
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October 7th, 2011 at 5:59 am
Very passionate and evocative. Really enjoyed it.
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October 7th, 2011 at 5:19 pm
Very nice with a very special last phrase: “moon inspired pace”
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October 7th, 2011 at 6:07 pm
a wonderful piece… it reminds us of the natural powers that bring people together and the intensity that results…
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October 8th, 2011 at 5:18 am
a beautiful piece…forgetting the cold when the loved one appears…loved the moon inspired pace
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October 8th, 2011 at 1:31 pm
this is deep ❤ lovely
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October 8th, 2011 at 5:43 pm
OMG! Passionate! Amazing
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October 8th, 2011 at 8:45 pm
well composed
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October 9th, 2011 at 12:15 am
I see you’re a poet! Your creations are amazing as well!
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October 9th, 2011 at 1:46 am
sensual, outpouring and energetic. the emotion becomes hard to bear. this is such a wonderful poem.
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October 9th, 2011 at 9:29 am
Beautiful, I am glad you stopped by my blog because now I have be introduced to yours. I look forward to reading here often.
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October 9th, 2011 at 2:41 pm
Wonderfully sensational and deep! The longing is palpable.
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October 9th, 2011 at 11:22 pm
Full of emotion and desire. I loved the poem.
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October 10th, 2011 at 8:41 am
beautifully and sensuously captured passion. so very tender yet full of warmth.
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October 10th, 2011 at 9:35 am
very nice 🙂
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October 10th, 2011 at 9:46 am
I love how the rhymes tumble along on top of each other. Very sensual.
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October 11th, 2011 at 3:37 pm
very evocative…. i liked it very much!
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October 12th, 2011 at 11:40 am
This is great!
You could be a great successful song-writer someday! 😀
✰ ThaaNie.
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October 12th, 2011 at 2:27 pm
Sensational,longing depicted and felt.
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October 12th, 2011 at 3:25 pm
good to see your work
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October 12th, 2011 at 6:08 pm
I love this poem! 🙂
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October 12th, 2011 at 6:11 pm
Wow that was a very beautiful poem. You are very good at poetry. Hey if you get the chance check my blog out for the poetry and let me know if i can fix my poetry.
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October 14th, 2011 at 3:54 pm
Scott….very nice…you have a minimalist approach that is very powerful and evocative. It reminds me a bit of Emily Dickinson’s work, in its apparent simplicity that disguises depth. The starkness makes the passion come through clearly….good stuff.
I’m looking forward to seeing more…..
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November 24th, 2011 at 11:50 am
This is magnificent! You’re amazing with words.
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