I should have never left
we are like one mind in poetry
I need to fly back and write some
as I’m needing all you are for me
I’ve fallen deeper from the distance
from my soul’s muse and my sole sanity
Lips will softly graze your neck and speak
proverbs inspired by the black ink
Nothing is more perfectly exotic
than your eyes in the low light, and
no music beckons my soul like
your voice telling me to hit that
You wanna swim first, just imagine
we’ll make climactic castles on the beach
Quenched by aftermath of our rain dance
as you chant and wrap yourself around me
Lovers and forever soul mates
eyes connected as our souls mate
We need times like this together more
inside of my forever fate
Never looking at the past
but tell me as you’re looking back
To push the slow motion rewind
so we can play it all again
My mind fast forwards to the future
every day wanting more of you
In every stanza you will know for sure
a million stances say I need you
~
Scott Mitchell
~
~
~
~
~
~
Be sure to watch the video
and you’ll know the music that helped inspire this dance
Thanks to Artistry Allure for sharing the video
February 19th, 2013 at 11:53 am
Your feelings truly flow through your words, Scott, very beautiful, as always!
February 19th, 2013 at 1:54 pm
Thanks Lauren! After watching that poetic video I felt a rush of inspiration and I wrote it to the same beat
February 19th, 2013 at 1:10 pm
Tout simplement sublime Scott! Tres beau poeme, empli d’attente et de sensualite.
February 19th, 2013 at 2:12 pm
Many thanks my Catherine. It’s kind of like my heart today I guess.
I hope you get some of your awesomeness put into a new poem soon!
February 19th, 2013 at 1:12 pm
Lauren says it all man! Wonderful flowetry
February 19th, 2013 at 2:14 pm
Hey, flowetry… I love that word. Thanks Upe! I’m looking forward to putting up yours on the other blog tomorrow
February 19th, 2013 at 3:08 pm
I can’t believe to explain how much I loved both your poem… and the video. Hope you don’t mind I might quote some of your words tonight… or post it… Just beautiful.
February 19th, 2013 at 3:10 pm
Thanks Butterfly! That’s a big compliment for me. My words are yours to quote all you like
I’ll be looking forward to your new inspired poems!
February 19th, 2013 at 4:48 pm
The video and poem together are a work of art. Love it love it.
~~Shianwrites~
February 19th, 2013 at 4:51 pm
The poem and song together are a work of art! Love it love it!
February 19th, 2013 at 4:54 pm
Thanks Shian! 3 of my 4 favorite things together. Music, art, and poetry…
February 19th, 2013 at 7:42 pm
Awww….sensual and cute…i love it
February 20th, 2013 at 4:20 pm
Thanks Domi! I think I started a new genre for myself and I’d call it jazzy flow
Hope all is good with you
Hey señorita, I’m waiting for new inspired words or art on your site there
February 21st, 2013 at 12:34 am
Uuuuu i like it. And awww i love how you love my stuff. I’ll see if i take pics tomorrow. OR welll today since you will probably not see this comment for a few hours.
February 19th, 2013 at 7:52 pm
This is so great Scott and that song gives me chills. It’s Hot!
February 20th, 2013 at 4:21 pm
Thanks Val! I’ve even listened to the song many times today. I never seem to get tired of it
February 20th, 2013 at 1:14 am
Beautifully written Scott!
February 20th, 2013 at 4:23 pm
Thanks! All my heart is in it
February 20th, 2013 at 9:40 am
Your words are more beautiful for this beat that in the video, Scott!
Hope your feeling much better, my friend…Have a great day!
xxx
February 20th, 2013 at 4:24 pm
Thanks Deb! Whenever I read my own poem I feel like I hear jazz now. Maybe I’m becoming a crazy poet
I am feeling much better. Thanks so much and many hugs my friend
February 20th, 2013 at 9:45 am
Scott, Scott, Scott… This is so beautiful.. what can i say, it’s exquisite…
February 20th, 2013 at 4:29 pm
Aww thanks Abi! I’m honored by that compliment!
February 20th, 2013 at 3:39 pm
The best time lyrics mean alot is when one is feeling down… The same lyrics, will make you dance and somehow feel dreamy When one is in high spirits. MUSIC IS MAGIC.. it brings the high and lows of us,… Words, discribes those emotions.. which you let flow down on paper… Love.. makes you wonder sometimes who you are or will be… oh dear.. Cheers, Mitchell
February 20th, 2013 at 4:32 pm
Yes, for sure. For example I guess that’s why I listen to sad songs while feeling sad. Why else when it only makes me sadder? I guess because I can relate in that moment. Same with upbeat ones when feeling all positive. I feel that music is definitely magic and goes right to the soul somehow. Dang, I like your mind Maureen! Thanks for the comment!
February 20th, 2013 at 3:44 pm
Your words were so very soothingly beautiful Scott, they surely would leave the heart of the one you adore…breathless! Very nicely penned!
February 20th, 2013 at 4:36 pm
Thanks Wendell! I think she will like these words, with some Jazz, candles, and my heart in my palm handing it to her
Always blessed by your visit my friend
February 21st, 2013 at 7:24 pm
Beautiful and very evocative!! Loved the video too!!
March 4th, 2013 at 10:37 am
Thanks Mimo!
March 4th, 2013 at 10:29 am
YOU are definitively very talented!!
March 4th, 2013 at 10:37 am
Thanks my friend. All I can do is spill out a heart and hope it reads well
Bendiciones…
March 7th, 2013 at 3:59 pm
I love the lyrical descriptiveness and depth of this love poem … encapsulated in these lines, I think:
‘I’ve fallen deeper from the distance
from my soul’s muse and my sole sanity’
March 28th, 2013 at 11:43 am
Awesome! Loved the video too
May 10th, 2013 at 2:05 am
Hmmm
Love. … the beauty of it truly radiates one’s soul.
“As our souls mate” “a million stances say I need you”
Love the words….
May 10th, 2013 at 3:17 pm
You thoughts manifests so beautifully, Scott!
“In every stanza you will know for sure
a million stances say I need you” — this expression effortlessly captured the mind. Stay safe and enjoy, my fellow “star-harvester”.