Adhering to social norm, and
obligated duty at the ball
I ask Your Majesty for a dance
and you gracefully extend a hand
Then we step, spin, and sway
as eyes behold in awe
But, who am I in late e’en
to command the silence of a queen
Laying motionless in the cuverie
as I savor the côtes
rousing deep breath and sigh
And I, not befittingly
command a vineyard of floral unfold
The sun riseth not, but heat is known
as lord of land tends each blossom
and shall forsake none
Who am I to drink as a noble
and taketh of fruit so divine
Thy hands remove a canopy
which adorned all I aspire
Seized and raised to mouth
Engaging in gluttonous frolic
as the queen declares ‘halt not!’
I shalt not forbid thee
a request for royal execution
Assign thy sacrifice as mine
Descend on my dagger
and raise with calm retreat
Exhaustive love for loss of life
conquers and consumes thine eyes
Mine end too, be not untimely
as harvest comes to pass
Rims of the barriques break!
I decant into your grasp
and a peasant dons a crown
~
Scott Mitchell
January 29th, 2013 at 11:00 pm
I just get lost in your beautiful poetry, Scott…I love this!
Hugs xxx
January 31st, 2013 at 8:10 am
Thanks much Debbie. This one was obviously unique in comparison to my previous writings, but I loved writing it. Maybe I’ll splurge in celebration and have a glass of wine tonight
Many hugs to you my dear friend
January 30th, 2013 at 7:31 am
My my, you’re such a magnificent writer. This took my breath away. Bravo Scott’
January 31st, 2013 at 8:19 am
Your sovereign pen evoked a male-blush in me with such words, dear princess of eastern shores. So graceful of thine and the honor be mine.
Thanks Shian. I’m not bragging, but the part I really love of my poem is simply “as the queen declares ‘halt not!’”
It’s the first time I read my own words and laugh every time I read it. I don’t know; just imagining the setting or something. Uhhh….
January 31st, 2013 at 12:30 pm
Oh Scott, you made me blush… I get what you write. Sometimes within the moment you write and not think of it, but whenever you look back you are amazed, blown away or just laugh.
It’s almost Friday. Yay!
January 30th, 2013 at 11:11 am
another great!
January 31st, 2013 at 8:22 am
Thanks Val! I hope your pen continues inspired and giving me daily great reads!
January 30th, 2013 at 2:17 pm
You have a beautiful way of expressing word through poetry… I love this poem…
January 31st, 2013 at 8:23 am
Aww, thanks so much Sue. You’re awesome. I still always hope for more new writing from you. If it happens, don’t forget to share
January 30th, 2013 at 9:52 pm
I loved this. I read it out loud my second time through and it is musical. Do you ever perform your poetry?
January 31st, 2013 at 8:28 am
thanks so much! Do I ever perform it? I want to say no, but behind closed doors or on evening shores, perhaps I have!
Seriously though, no, I wouldn’t even know how to pursue doing so for an audience or something. I just find great satisfaction in pouring out here in the blog
January 31st, 2013 at 10:15 pm
Well I think it is a wonderful sounding poem read aloud. Maybe some adventurous night you could make your way to an open mic and give it a read.
February 1st, 2013 at 7:58 am
I’m honored by your compliment. Maybe someday I’ll have the courage to try that
January 31st, 2013 at 9:37 am
every lines are breath taking, wow, superbly written…
January 31st, 2013 at 2:02 pm
Thanks my friend! I enjoyed writing it and want to do a part 2 as well
January 31st, 2013 at 1:11 pm
You where her Knight that night after you both rocked the dance floor.. I tell you Scott.. Its mind rocking this poem.. phew.. you are a word weaver.. trés bien.. PRIMA….:)
January 31st, 2013 at 2:21 pm
Thanks Maureen! I was beginning to think this one had failed to capture the minds of readers because not too many comments here etc. And I understand it is a different style that some may not enjoy, but once again you see right into my mind. Thanks so much for reading and commenting always! You’re an inspiration for sure!
January 31st, 2013 at 3:14 pm
Daunting, adventuresome…great language.
February 10th, 2013 at 7:45 pm
Thanks! It’s somewhat unique in comparison to my other stuff. Well, I almost don’t write any two things the same ever.
January 31st, 2013 at 7:46 pm
I like this one .. fells very Shakespeare
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You are just so versatile! Have you published a compilation yet?
February 1st, 2013 at 8:09 am
Muchas thanks Toya! I was imagining it as kinda Shakespearish, and also a weekend stay at an estate in our wine region here that I’ve been yearning to do. Hopefully this spring…
No, I never published a compilation yet, but I’ve been considering doing it as a free eBook soon.
Have a great weekend!
February 1st, 2013 at 5:20 pm
Nice that’d be awesome especially with the graphics . come to think about it I have one floating around on issu.com somewhere lol not nearly as good as yours though so I look forward to that.
Have a great one too!
February 1st, 2013 at 12:07 pm
This poem is rather exotic. I can not decide if it is about sex or a lustrious walk in the garden. lol I love it though! My mind tends to wander towards the gutter first then branches out to other ideas once I have conformation. Hehe
February 1st, 2013 at 12:56 pm
Haha, cool. Yeah, I tend to add mystery from time to time so the mind can venture toward whatever path it prefers
Thanks so much for your comment. I’m honored!
February 2nd, 2013 at 6:46 pm
Sorry I’m late in visiting due to this annoying flu, Scott, but I’m so glad I didn’t miss this one! Your words are stunning and the way you write (in any style) is captivating. This poem has a large dose of excitement reeling through it…I can feel it!
February 10th, 2013 at 7:47 pm
Hey Lauren. I’m much later with my reply lol. Sometimes I could swear I replied but then see I didn’t when I return. Thanks for the compliment! I had fun writing it. As I mentioned to Shian, I’m still laughing each time I read that the queen declares “halt not!” hahahha. I’m crazy. Have a great week my friend
February 10th, 2013 at 8:51 pm
Yep, that’s a great line, Scott and it’s good to be crazy!
Have a great week ahead, too! Where did the weekend go?
February 5th, 2013 at 5:06 pm
Thanks for visiting my blog
I hope you visit again soon
February 10th, 2013 at 7:50 pm
and thanks to you for visiting mine! I often come across blogs that intrigue me for one reason and another and am glad I found yours.
February 10th, 2013 at 10:05 pm
You are to sweet
Thanks!
February 5th, 2013 at 10:44 pm
what a beauty Scott
loved it
February 10th, 2013 at 7:53 pm
Thanks Soma! I appreciate your visit and comment. Have a great week!
February 9th, 2013 at 7:53 pm
Your pen carries a magical ink! Keep penning and creating magic, Scott. The world deserves to be enthralled by it.
February 10th, 2013 at 7:59 pm
Thank you O one of silent fingers. Honored by your visit and compliment. I hope you keep sharing your works of poetic deliciousness! You’re one of my favorites and I’m adding you to my favorites page actually.
February 10th, 2013 at 11:22 am
Beautiful words, Scott. They have the power to make one’s mind wander to another realm where emotions run wild and free!!
February 10th, 2013 at 8:19 pm
Thanks Mari! I sometimes think I allow my imagination to run TOO wild, but I have to write it how I see it
Hope you are well sweetie
February 10th, 2013 at 4:41 pm
Really enjoyed reading this Shakespear-esque piece of poetry that let my phantasy travel…well done!
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February 10th, 2013 at 8:21 pm
Thanks Miss F! I’ve been known to do some travelling as well
Honored by the visit of my favorite super-model fashion expert! Make it a great week!
February 21st, 2013 at 1:53 pm
Aw, thanks!