Thanks! It was my first Haiku. I analyzed some on the site of LScott Poetry until I felt ready to write one and it just came out as what you see here
For more (and better) Haikus, as well as awesome poetry, visit her at: http://lscotthoughts.com/
Scott, this is absolutely beautiful…your words, the perfect image and so many meanings in these few syllables; an awesome first haiku and I can’t wait for more from you! And you completely caught me off guard by paying me this HUGE complement! Thank you so much! I am no expert on any type of writing, let alone haiku, and to think you were analyzing mine? Wow, I’m stunned and honored…big hugs and thank you again, my friend! xx
Hey Lauren, it’s comment catch up day for me
Thanks for always being here commenting and for sharing your own amazing work/heart always on your blog. Stay blessed forever
How do I begin to apologise for my silence…. ‘Don’t think I have done much reading in a while either
I have A LOT of catching up to do….. but I guess this is a start
Hey, life happens and we get busy. Very understandable and the same happens to me too often
I’m doing very well, thanks. I hope you are well and always hope to see you writing again!
Thanks Maureen! I did spend a great deal of time trying to find the perfect image to match what I was saying. I found almost the perfect one and edited it
I just think it’s beautiful and the photo is so pretty too – I love it that we’re not sure if anybody writes romantic haikus, why not? I say. Have you seen the Spanish form called Shadorma? Stanza’s of six lines (sestets) with no set rhyme scheme. Thought to be a variation of haiku, which is clear from its syllable pattern – you’re good at this Scott, take a look at the Shadorma
Just passing along this info to all my ABC Award nominees..….I think it’s a great idea, I have already joined! See you there!
~ Celeste ~
Congratulations on your ABC Award!
As the originator of this award you may be interested to know that I have now set up a Facebook group for all bloggers who have been given the ABC Award – a place for you to meet new bloggers, and share and support each other. You can join the group here: https://www.facebook.com/groups/ABCaward/?bookmark_t=group
Please also let any other bloggers, that you know have been given the award, know about this group too – then we can all ‘spread the word’
I have also set up a Facebook page – the ABC Award – where you can now add links to all of your blog posts and writing – share your work with a new audience, gain new readers, and find out what other ABC Award bloggers are writing about.
You can find the page here: https://www.facebook.com/ABCaward?bookmark_t=page
Just ‘like’ the page and get started – and do let all your blog readers know about this page – I believe that all of our blogs can only be improved by letting our readers know about other blogs – that way you will also have new readers discover you too!
Happy blogging – and congratulations again on the ABC Award – you’re awesome!
-ferragudofan
algarveblogdotnet.wordpress.com
Thanks Shian! Yes, spring time. I was thinking about human natures and spring time while having lunch. Maybe this is why I feel like writing something new every hour (but been resisting)
hey thanks Wendell! No new poem from you today? whatup??
Yea, I love using images on almost everything here. Sometimes I’m not sure if everyone can see the relation, but I’m quite sure you always can
Thanks! Hey, I’ve been trying to figure out why your blog title rings such a bell with me and it finally hit me
The movie A River Runs Through It. Hmm, I think that was the name. Anyway, love your blog and thanks for the visit!
Reblogged this on LSCOTT POETRY and commented:
I couldn’t help sharing this beautiful spring haiku from one of the best poets I’ve met on WP. Scott has a romantic heart and a gentle spirit and I’m honored to “know” him!
Thank you! Hey I’m following you now on tumblr. I just have to get more familiar with tumblr. It’s a little different than what I’m used to but I’ll get it figured out
Thank you Michelle. I found that photo on bigstock.com. When I need a different kind of pic for something published I love bigstock because of the selection and it’s only a few dollars.
Thank you sooo much Shian! You know you’re one of my favorites and being awarded from you is the utmost compliment and inspiration for me to continue on my blog. I appreciate you! God bless always my friend
I so so so so SO can’t do haiku!! I admire you for it. But that picture. It is fantastic. I am just amazed on wordpress what I’m being exposed to. about once a week I go cruising sites & tags, & see some awesome stuff. Love the photography that goes on. This though, was like a very neat package
VodkaWasMyMuse.wordpress.com / WordsFallFromMyEyes.wordpress.com
Hi Scott, I learnt of your blog from GG’s Blog: http://gagangupt16.wordpress.com/. You are in his, “About Some of the Fantastic blogs I have came across…” He wasn’t kidding. My, this poem is beautiful! I’m looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
The last line evoked so many thoughts with me (I guess that’s why the site is called ‘evoking the deep’). The wings could be golden, platinum, magical – instead they are bronzed. I wonder if it’s a literal image or if the poem hints of greater things to come from the newly emerged creature familiarizing itself with the world.
April 19th, 2012 at 10:53 am
The words just capture the moment.
April 19th, 2012 at 11:18 am
Thanks! It was my first Haiku. I analyzed some on the site of LScott Poetry until I felt ready to write one and it just came out as what you see here
For more (and better) Haikus, as well as awesome poetry, visit her at:
http://lscotthoughts.com/
April 19th, 2012 at 11:22 am
Yes, her poetry is deep and amazing!
April 20th, 2012 at 11:50 pm
Scott, this is absolutely beautiful…your words, the perfect image and so many meanings in these few syllables; an awesome first haiku and I can’t wait for more from you! And you completely caught me off guard by paying me this HUGE complement! Thank you so much! I am no expert on any type of writing, let alone haiku, and to think you were analyzing mine? Wow, I’m stunned and honored…big hugs and thank you again, my friend! xx
May 5th, 2012 at 10:03 am
Hey Lauren, it’s comment catch up day for me
Thanks for always being here commenting and for sharing your own amazing work/heart always on your blog. Stay blessed forever
April 19th, 2012 at 10:56 am
Hello Scott!
How do I begin to apologise for my silence…. ‘Don’t think I have done much reading in a while either
I have A LOT of catching up to do….. but I guess this is a start
How have you been you?
April 19th, 2012 at 11:13 am
Hey, life happens and we get busy. Very understandable and the same happens to me too often
I’m doing very well, thanks. I hope you are well and always hope to see you writing again!
April 19th, 2012 at 11:27 am
The image..!!!. Is a poem/story on its own…
April 19th, 2012 at 12:09 pm
Thanks Maureen! I did spend a great deal of time trying to find the perfect image to match what I was saying. I found almost the perfect one and edited it
April 19th, 2012 at 11:28 am
‘Glaze of spring fragrance …’ how lovely
April 19th, 2012 at 12:12 pm
Thank you Polly. I’m not sure if anybody ever writes romantic haikus, but the secret in this one is that it’s slightly romantic.
April 19th, 2012 at 12:15 pm
I just think it’s beautiful and the photo is so pretty too – I love it that we’re not sure if anybody writes romantic haikus, why not? I say. Have you seen the Spanish form called Shadorma? Stanza’s of six lines (sestets) with no set rhyme scheme. Thought to be a variation of haiku, which is clear from its syllable pattern – you’re good at this Scott, take a look at the Shadorma
April 19th, 2012 at 11:31 am
Beautiful
Thank you for sharing
April 19th, 2012 at 12:14 pm
Thanks Crystal! I appreciate your visit and comment!
April 19th, 2012 at 12:17 pm
Love this….beautiful!
Celeste
April 19th, 2012 at 12:34 pm
Thanks Celeste!! Blessings
April 19th, 2012 at 12:17 pm
Just passing along this info to all my ABC Award nominees..….I think it’s a great idea, I have already joined! See you there!
~ Celeste ~
Congratulations on your ABC Award!
As the originator of this award you may be interested to know that I have now set up a Facebook group for all bloggers who have been given the ABC Award – a place for you to meet new bloggers, and share and support each other. You can join the group here:
https://www.facebook.com/groups/ABCaward/?bookmark_t=group
Please also let any other bloggers, that you know have been given the award, know about this group too – then we can all ‘spread the word’
I have also set up a Facebook page – the ABC Award – where you can now add links to all of your blog posts and writing – share your work with a new audience, gain new readers, and find out what other ABC Award bloggers are writing about.
You can find the page here:
https://www.facebook.com/ABCaward?bookmark_t=page
Just ‘like’ the page and get started – and do let all your blog readers know about this page – I believe that all of our blogs can only be improved by letting our readers know about other blogs – that way you will also have new readers discover you too!
Happy blogging – and congratulations again on the ABC Award – you’re awesome!
-ferragudofan
algarveblogdotnet.wordpress.com
April 20th, 2012 at 1:05 pm
thanks! I joined the group. It’s a good idea there
April 19th, 2012 at 12:27 pm
I can’t help wondering if your twitter post and this poem are related..both are lovely
April 19th, 2012 at 12:32 pm
Sometimes I think you know me too well Lenise
Thanks for the comment!
April 19th, 2012 at 12:29 pm
That is just beautiful, Scott!
Hugs to ya! xx
April 19th, 2012 at 12:33 pm
Thanks Debbie! I always need the hugs
Hugs back to you!
April 19th, 2012 at 1:22 pm
spring time; new beginning. Short and sweet. Beautiful Scott! Awesome picture.
April 20th, 2012 at 1:06 pm
Thanks Shian! Yes, spring time. I was thinking about human natures and spring time while having lunch. Maybe this is why I feel like writing something new every hour (but been resisting)
April 20th, 2012 at 1:51 pm
Write write as much as you can. Your muse is whispering in your ears.
April 19th, 2012 at 1:23 pm
Thanks ever so for the like! Your blog is lovely!!!! Jen
April 20th, 2012 at 1:08 pm
Thanks Jen. Very much appreciate your visit and comment! Have a great weekend!
April 19th, 2012 at 1:54 pm
Nice Haiku
April 20th, 2012 at 1:15 pm
Thank you Sarah Jane! Glad to see you here. Just like old times
Have a great weekend and I hope all is well there
April 19th, 2012 at 2:05 pm
Refreshing
April 20th, 2012 at 1:17 pm
Thanks. Well, this week I did my first sonnet and my first haiku. I feel productive
April 20th, 2012 at 1:18 pm
Absolutely… I did my first Haiku this past week too
April 19th, 2012 at 2:19 pm
Very nicely done Haiku!! I like it !
April 25th, 2012 at 8:54 am
Thank you! I thought I already replied to this, but came back to catch up and see I didn’t haha. Hugs
April 19th, 2012 at 2:31 pm
Great stuff.
April 20th, 2012 at 1:26 pm
Thanks Dave! I appreciate your visit
April 19th, 2012 at 3:40 pm
Lovely piece.
April 20th, 2012 at 1:32 pm
Thanks ellibloo! after reading a couple of your poems yesterday and today I realized I need to follow. You’re a awesome writer!
April 20th, 2012 at 1:36 pm
Thank you very much. It takes one to know one!
April 19th, 2012 at 3:46 pm
That’s a great first attempt if you ask me.
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Lovely Haiku Scott
Sherline
April 20th, 2012 at 1:35 pm
Thanks Sherline! Stay blessed and have a great weekend!
April 19th, 2012 at 6:00 pm
Sweet! The image gives double the impact of the words!
April 20th, 2012 at 1:37 pm
hey thanks Wendell! No new poem from you today? whatup??
Yea, I love using images on almost everything here. Sometimes I’m not sure if everyone can see the relation, but I’m quite sure you always can
April 19th, 2012 at 8:05 pm
Words perfectly distilled into images!
April 20th, 2012 at 1:41 pm
Thanks! Hey, I’ve been trying to figure out why your blog title rings such a bell with me and it finally hit me
The movie A River Runs Through It. Hmm, I think that was the name. Anyway, love your blog and thanks for the visit!
April 20th, 2012 at 9:53 am
Perfect!!!
April 20th, 2012 at 1:42 pm
Thank you guttermutt!
April 20th, 2012 at 3:22 pm
I so miss reading your poetry and must say love it and the image goes well! Thank you for sharing! God Bless
April 25th, 2012 at 8:55 am
aww thanks PJ!! I’m always so happy to see you commenting here. God bless you forever, friend
April 21st, 2012 at 6:49 am
It’s nice to evolve.. HUGS
April 25th, 2012 at 8:55 am
Thanks Simona. Yes, change is good, especially when we can see the beauty in it
April 22nd, 2012 at 3:41 am
your poetry always amuses me. And this one is great! Mind blowing concept and words!
April 25th, 2012 at 8:57 am
Thanks! That’s an incredible compliment and much appreciated
April 22nd, 2012 at 4:55 am
Beautiful!
I could see bronze wings on the back of my mind!
X
April 25th, 2012 at 8:58 am
Thanks Nanda! Your mind is always soaring as a beautiful butterfly. I can see it in your writing! Hugs
April 22nd, 2012 at 3:04 pm
So beautiful!
April 25th, 2012 at 9:00 am
Thanks Madhu! Hope you are well there and being blessed
April 24th, 2012 at 12:00 am
Hi Scott. I just nominated you for a Sunshine Award, though I didn’t have the new web address. Will fix that!
http://lisawrosenberg.com/2012/04/24/sunshine-award-nomination/
April 25th, 2012 at 9:02 am
Thank you so so much Lisa! It’s such an honor receiving such an award!
April 25th, 2012 at 11:08 pm
You are very welcome!
April 24th, 2012 at 11:06 am
Magical words and image.
April 25th, 2012 at 9:02 am
Thank you!
April 24th, 2012 at 4:44 pm
Reblogged this on LSCOTT POETRY and commented:
I couldn’t help sharing this beautiful spring haiku from one of the best poets I’ve met on WP. Scott has a romantic heart and a gentle spirit and I’m honored to “know” him!
April 25th, 2012 at 9:03 am
Thanks again Lauren!
April 25th, 2012 at 2:57 am
I really, really love this photo.
April 25th, 2012 at 9:05 am
Thank you! Hey I’m following you now on tumblr. I just have to get more familiar with tumblr. It’s a little different than what I’m used to but I’ll get it figured out
April 25th, 2012 at 7:01 am
Delicate, lovely picture. Thanks for visiting my blog too.
April 25th, 2012 at 9:05 am
Thank you Libby!
April 25th, 2012 at 8:23 am
Challenge you to a Lucky 7 MEME Challenge
Sorry, it took time for me to pass on. Have fun.
April 25th, 2012 at 9:06 am
Hey thanks! Hmm a challenge. I rarely resist a challenge
I’ll have to check that out and hopefully have time soon to fulfill it
April 25th, 2012 at 8:26 pm
Good to know you are a sport! Take your time Scott.
April 26th, 2012 at 8:54 am
lovely haiku…and stunning photo (that light!!!)
May 5th, 2012 at 9:04 pm
Thank you Michelle. I found that photo on bigstock.com. When I need a different kind of pic for something published I love bigstock because of the selection and it’s only a few dollars.
April 26th, 2012 at 1:46 pm
Lovely! I’m glad Lauren re-blogged it.
May 5th, 2012 at 9:05 pm
Thank you for the visit Betty. I love Lauren’s writing and was honored to have her repost
April 26th, 2012 at 10:51 pm
I wanted to let you know that I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award! You can see the post here: http://shianwrites.wordpress.com/2012/04/26/versatile-blogger-award/ Congratulations! Here’s the website if you want more info on your award: http://versatilebloggeraward.wordpress.com/
April 27th, 2012 at 7:55 am
Thank you sooo much Shian! You know you’re one of my favorites and being awarded from you is the utmost compliment and inspiration for me to continue on my blog. I appreciate you! God bless always my friend
April 27th, 2012 at 7:03 am
I so so so so SO can’t do haiku!! I admire you for it. But that picture. It is fantastic. I am just amazed on wordpress what I’m being exposed to. about once a week I go cruising sites & tags, & see some awesome stuff. Love the photography that goes on. This though, was like a very neat package
VodkaWasMyMuse.wordpress.com / WordsFallFromMyEyes.wordpress.com
May 5th, 2012 at 9:07 pm
Thanks! It was my first haiku. When I see your writing I really believe you could do haikus. Seriously
Take care!
April 27th, 2012 at 7:40 pm
Excellent first attempt, Scott! I really love it.
May 5th, 2012 at 9:08 pm
Thanks!
May 2nd, 2012 at 7:07 pm
Beautiful!!
May 5th, 2012 at 9:08 pm
Thanks Amanda!
May 3rd, 2012 at 8:30 am
wonderful!! the poem and the image!
May 5th, 2012 at 9:09 pm
Thanks Mimo. I wish I had your talent so I could have my own library of amazing photos that I took myself so I could use them
May 6th, 2012 at 10:01 am
Such overwhelming beauty, Scott!
May 21st, 2012 at 3:18 pm
Hi Scott, I learnt of your blog from GG’s Blog: http://gagangupt16.wordpress.com/. You are in his, “About Some of the Fantastic blogs I have came across…” He wasn’t kidding. My, this poem is beautiful! I’m looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
May 29th, 2012 at 7:13 am
Well Said!
Happy Writing
-Naima.
May 31st, 2012 at 4:15 pm
Reblogged this on The Written Blit and commented:
What an awesome haiku!
October 1st, 2012 at 6:16 am
The last line evoked so many thoughts with me (I guess that’s why the site is called ‘evoking the deep’). The wings could be golden, platinum, magical – instead they are bronzed. I wonder if it’s a literal image or if the poem hints of greater things to come from the newly emerged creature familiarizing itself with the world.
January 24th, 2013 at 10:55 am
For me it meant a few things. Even literally bronzed
Sorry for my late reply as I’ve had a difficult few months. Thanks so so much for your comment!
January 24th, 2013 at 7:39 am
Ah… no words for this!!
Now am wondering why I had taken so long to be here.
January 24th, 2013 at 10:57 am
And I take a deep breath of appreciation again. Thanks so much silentfingers!