I remember when I held you
the first time in my arm
Hostile climates didn’t stop me
as this warrior won your heart
I remember when you felt my heart
as we shared our first kiss
A dream became a certainty
I received an awaited wish
I remember when my eyes widened
the moment I was in awe
My hands on large firm pillows
after taking off your bra
I remember when you unfastened
yourself to allow me in
Quivering and uncontainable
you stop a kiss to bite my chin
I remember when I was gentle
giving no pressure to submit
Thighs drew fiercely on my hips
telling me to push again
I remember when we fought
temptation to cry aloud
As I left through the airport gate
but the promise still lives now
I wonder when I’ll see you
on the most essential of my trips
Bizarre stimuli in my soul
as I’m dying to taste your lips
I wonder when you’ll join me
as we try something new
No looking back as WE board the plane
as I’m coming home with you
~
~Scott Mitchell
Photo Credit to Brittney J
December 8th, 2011 at 2:34 pm
enchanting!
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December 11th, 2011 at 12:57 pm
Thanks Mercedes. I always appreciate your visits here!
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December 8th, 2011 at 2:35 pm
Beautiful post, good to see another post from you. I love how you make us feel like with right there feeling just what you feeling. Not sure if that make sense since im heavily medicated right now. I shall return to correct it if it didnt come out correctly. ty for sharing the beautiful poem with us. God Bless 🙂
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December 11th, 2011 at 1:02 pm
Thanks so much PJ. Yes, all you say is perfect (because it compliments me :D) I always love knowing you visited my blog. God bless always
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December 8th, 2011 at 2:43 pm
Love the rhythm and the subject matter… I could see it all … nice job, buddy 🙂
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December 11th, 2011 at 1:03 pm
Thanks! compliments from you are very encouraging. Your writing is awesome
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December 8th, 2011 at 3:10 pm
Beautiful, deep and sad.
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December 11th, 2011 at 1:05 pm
Thanks Shauna! I believe I at least did get the feeling across because of your comment. It’s quiet, but intense. It’s slow, but highly inspired. It’s simple, but very deep. It’s love, but it’s sad.
Hope you are well and I see you write more soon!
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December 8th, 2011 at 3:20 pm
You write wonderfully…
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December 11th, 2011 at 1:06 pm
Thank you!
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December 8th, 2011 at 3:47 pm
Thanks for sharing….this is beautiful writing….
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December 8th, 2011 at 3:56 pm
Heart-wrenching and erotic, full of vivid memory! Love it!
P.S. All of the pictures of the women you post are just gorgeous! Are they real-life models for you? 😉
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December 11th, 2011 at 1:13 pm
Hey Jenna! Thanks so much for the comment. For me it is the same as you say. Some of the pics, such as this one is from a friend model. I love her artistic style in photos and she gave me permission to use any of them. You can see her facebook page on the link above. Thanks for reading and commenting. I’ll check you out today to see what’s new. xo
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December 8th, 2011 at 4:29 pm
This brings back so many memories of a man I adore, and wish I could have more. Beautifully written.
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December 11th, 2011 at 1:19 pm
Thanks Christina! Well, I hope the object of your adoration can be present with you soon and rescue the heart of his princess. You deserve the best and a blessed romantic life. hugs
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December 8th, 2011 at 4:58 pm
this is deeply erotic in the most beautiful way and much more..
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December 11th, 2011 at 1:23 pm
THanks Claudia. While I have a lot of room for improvement I still feel some level of success just knowing a writer as yourself even follows my blog. Happy holidays and keep writing those amazing poems!
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December 8th, 2011 at 6:13 pm
this is very romantic, erotic and deep but somehow sad piece, I truly love the emotions that brought me by simply reading this piece …. beautifully written…
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December 11th, 2011 at 6:30 pm
thanks willofheart. I appreciate the compliments and the fact that completely understand the intent of the poem.
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December 8th, 2011 at 6:29 pm
Effective use of “I remember…” then changing to “I wonder…” Pulls the reader through the poem.
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December 11th, 2011 at 6:27 pm
Thanks for visiting and commenting. Yes, and it’s how my mind works. The memories evoke the wonder of when I’ll relive them 🙂
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December 8th, 2011 at 6:35 pm
Thanks for coming through with another breath taking piece!… Thumbs up! 🙂
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December 11th, 2011 at 6:26 pm
Thanks for the comment! I’m still waiting for your next one! 🙂
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January 2nd, 2012 at 9:46 pm
Hello Scott,
I’ve nominated you for the Kreativ Blogger Award,
so please visit my blog for acceptance.
Festival King 🙂
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December 8th, 2011 at 8:38 pm
It’s amazing how you pull the readers in to feel what you’re feeling. You definitely have the talent for doing that. This is another beautiful poem, Scott, romantic, erotic and honest emotions conveyed. It’s just a part of life, now, wondering what you’ll write next! 🙂
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December 11th, 2011 at 5:27 pm
Thanks Lauren! Your comments are among the most inspiring for me to continue! I’m one of your biggest fans 🙂
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December 8th, 2011 at 9:53 pm
Scott…amazing. #thatisall
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December 11th, 2011 at 5:22 pm
Thanks Tomz. Every time my computer is on imagine me sitting at my desk tapping my fingers on it as I wait for new blog posts from http://insideoutrightsideup.wordpress.com/ 😀
I hope all is well there and you enjoy the approaching holiday!
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December 8th, 2011 at 10:50 pm
Overflowing with your trademark sensuality from previous posts, and studded with a sweet undertone of devotion and longing. A beautiful ode to a person and an experience. Wonderfully done, my friend. There are so many deep experiences in life that provoke us to look back and attempt to recapture the moment. Thank you for sharing
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December 11th, 2011 at 5:20 pm
Thanks my friend and you’re right. Some moments thrive in our hearts forever like a burning desire to relive them. After some years we finally agree what our elders taught us “always appreciate all you have and every moment” etc.
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December 9th, 2011 at 1:02 am
Wonderful!!
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December 9th, 2011 at 6:52 am
Erotic and raw as always. You know how to be sensual and animalistic in the best possible way.
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December 11th, 2011 at 5:17 pm
Thanks Sarah! Maybe my childhood nickname of tiger affected my adulthood 🙂
Your comments are always appreciated as I love all your writing and you know it.
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December 9th, 2011 at 9:55 am
Thanks for the ‘like’. Very nice post..Peace Tony
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December 9th, 2011 at 10:44 am
I was reading this last night. You use imagery very well.
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:59 pm
Thanks. I’m honored! I always like reading your posts
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December 12th, 2011 at 4:32 pm
Thanks, that means a lot. You handle a tough genre that I’ve always had some difficulty with. I’m looking forward to your next post.
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December 9th, 2011 at 11:15 am
I was stopping by to say thanks for the like when I read your poem – loved it! I love reading poetry so I’ll be back 🙂
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:57 pm
Thanks for stopping by and commenting! I love having feed back. I like what your “about” section says about you. No cooking, eh? Haha, I love cooking sometimes, but don’t tell anybody that
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December 9th, 2011 at 1:53 pm
so sensual, soothing, subtle tension builds to a memory we can grasp but cannot at the same time…thank you for posting to my facebook fan page – i really appreciate it!
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:55 pm
Thank you Liza and thanks for having your blog and fb fan page. I’m happy I found it as I love you writing too!
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December 9th, 2011 at 2:17 pm
wow…I wish all men could express themselves like you. Beautiful floetry.
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December 9th, 2011 at 3:17 pm
Oh we can 🙂 Just read my poems … there are more of us out there …. 🙂
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December 9th, 2011 at 2:29 pm
your words are very beautiful. hope to read more soon.
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:53 pm
Thanks Isabella! I’m reading some on your blog too. I like!
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December 9th, 2011 at 4:07 pm
this is real good,and tells of moments on the wings of love.thanks for sharing.
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:48 pm
Thank you j sirrah. I like your poetry as well!
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December 9th, 2011 at 5:48 pm
really intense… I love the visual feeling you always give in your writing. thank you for sharing your work!!
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:47 pm
Thank you Natasha. I’m honored by your visit and comment. I’ve been reading your blog and I love the mix of content there. You keep it very interesting. And you’re writing a novel? I guess I will know more as I read on…
Happy holidays!
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December 12th, 2011 at 5:49 pm
Hi Scott I enjoy visiting!! You are able to really carry a beautiful sense of sensuality in your work..AWESOME! Yes a novel (trying to.. LOL!).. thanks for visiting my site.. its a bit mishmosh but its me 🙂
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December 10th, 2011 at 1:51 pm
have you considered writing erotica prose? just wondering. You got the chops…
Peace, Jen
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:40 pm
Thanks Jen. I haven’t considered much yet. I’ve simply decided to spill out any longing thoughts I have into poems without being very conservative. If I get more serious I think that might be one of my top writing categories 🙂
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December 10th, 2011 at 4:14 pm
I like the way you illustrate your poems. The pictures and words together say so much.
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:42 pm
Thanks so much. I like adding a photo to every poem and I try to match it to the writing in some way.
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December 10th, 2011 at 5:19 pm
I have read several of your post now. very good work I love it. The photos you choose very well.
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:32 pm
Thanks, and I’m so happy you visited and commented! I hope to see you around more and to read more from you as well on your blog.
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December 10th, 2011 at 6:12 pm
*sigh*
your words capture the beauty and passion in these simple yet magnificent moments. so pretty. so private. thanks for letting us in 🙂
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:30 pm
Thanks cursi, I appreciate the comment. That’s what I can say for sure. Anybody that reads my things is definitely inside. I never was the type to hold something in (even when I should :D)
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December 11th, 2011 at 12:29 pm
Very lovely poem! I felt the same emptiness of being away and clueless!
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December 11th, 2011 at 4:27 pm
Yeah, it’s difficult. Thanks April and I hope any emptiness is filled forever soon! You deserve the best always!
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December 11th, 2011 at 6:58 pm
Um, WOW!
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December 11th, 2011 at 11:50 pm
wow Scott.. just beautiful and very romantic.. you are very good at this.. I am so glad that I got to read them..
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December 12th, 2011 at 7:02 pm
This gave me goosebumps! Great job Scott.
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December 12th, 2011 at 10:38 pm
Awww! Such a great post: deep and evoking. 🙂
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December 13th, 2011 at 2:42 am
aaaawwwwwww 🙂
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December 14th, 2011 at 8:55 am
Scott,i always look forward to reading your work because i am sure it will awaken something in me.i love love love the way you do your thing.amazing!
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December 14th, 2011 at 10:29 am
I was expecting something awful at the end (probably a bad habit from my own poetry) but this was so sweet! True love in all its glorious colours. Wonderful work!
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December 15th, 2011 at 3:32 pm
Thanks! Yes, I often try to express two sides of a situation, the good and bad, the hope and longing, etc
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December 14th, 2011 at 9:23 pm
scott,
this is sooo beautiful! i could feel it inside me!
no words can describe, thank you for sharing!
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December 15th, 2011 at 2:47 pm
Hey Nanda, thanks! Your opinion is highly valued. I always have a goal of getting better with expressing more with fewer words, as you have mastered. I always love your work!
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December 18th, 2011 at 12:33 pm
gosh, you made me blush! haha.
we’re always learning, dear! you’re the master here! i love your poems, they’re very very deep!
xxx
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December 15th, 2011 at 1:22 pm
this is a good poem. didnt know you write poetry until i checked the poems on your page. nicely done..
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December 15th, 2011 at 2:46 pm
Thank you! I’ve been liking your poetry as well
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December 15th, 2011 at 10:34 pm
What more can one say about something that is truly beautiful!
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December 17th, 2011 at 8:45 am
Hi Scott, thanks for dropping by my site and liking it. You create nice poetry. Have a great weekend!
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December 18th, 2011 at 6:03 pm
Lovely love poem! Very evocative of emotion!
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December 19th, 2011 at 6:50 pm
Hello..Thank you for the ‘like’. I like this poem. Deep love and passion expressed. As with advice to myself..keep writing..Peace Tony
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December 20th, 2011 at 10:08 am
OMG, Scott! You seem to have the power in your words to take me right to what you are writing about…careful now. 🙂 Excellent work, my friend.
I don not know how I could have missed your posting, So sorry to be so late to read.
Hugs, Deb xx
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December 21st, 2011 at 10:22 am
Thanks Debbie! I’m honored that my words were so effective 😀
I hope your holidays are blessed!
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December 20th, 2011 at 8:25 pm
Hiya, Scott,
I’m back again to bring you a Christmas gift.
Merry Christmas,
Deb xx
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December 21st, 2011 at 10:26 am
Awe, Debbie, THANKS! It even has my name there. Too cute!
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December 21st, 2011 at 7:39 am
Beautifully written my man. I hadn’t gotten a chance to check out your blog recently but I see that I’ve really missed a lot. I love how you handle romance in a non-corny way and handle passion in a way the doesn’t seem prevented.
Good work as always.
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December 21st, 2011 at 1:44 pm
hey, thanks man! I appreciate the comment and encouragement.
I do try to avoid going overboard, yet not holding back on the desires within 🙂
Happy holidays!
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December 23rd, 2011 at 8:27 pm
Merry Christmas Scott.
What a wonderful poem, hope within the sadness.
Wishing you a very Merry Christmas, all the best to you and yours this beautiful holiday season.
Big hugs, Nikki
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December 26th, 2011 at 4:33 am
Wow .. you are very skilled! I rate poetry according to the vividness of the image to creates in my mind. Yours was perfect!
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December 27th, 2011 at 6:10 am
The Muses have led me here
A chance tap, and then, the view
You enrich people’s times
Reading gems such as these
Rock on!
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December 28th, 2011 at 4:57 pm
Hey Scott, I nominated you for the Versatile Blog Award. See my blog post: http://gabrielsfury.wordpress.com/2011/12/28/the-versatile-blogger-award/
for more information.
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December 29th, 2011 at 9:27 am
Hey, thanks so much! I’m honored that you think enough of my writing to do that. Many holiday hugs to you!
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December 31st, 2011 at 2:09 am
This is just lovely, really lovely – and very real. Beautiful.
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December 31st, 2011 at 1:01 pm
Happy New Year, Scott!
May you always stay inspired, and may the words in your heart always flow out of you!
Hugs, Deb xx
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January 1st, 2012 at 5:11 am
Dear Scott,
It is with great pleasure that I nominate you for the Versatile Blogger Award! Your poetry is raw and Wonderful. We NEED Poetry!
Please see my blog for guidelines on how to accept the nomination.
Happy New Year and thank you for writing with Heart,
Jen
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January 3rd, 2012 at 9:59 am
I really love the rare honesty and intimacy of your writing. It is beautiful.
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January 3rd, 2012 at 1:50 pm
Hi Scott,
I have an award for you.
The details are in the link.
http://adamsart.wordpress.com/2012/01/02/7×7-award/
Deb xx
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January 6th, 2012 at 1:35 am
Excellent poem, good sir! Sorry I haven’t been around, but I’m glad to see your still chugging along.
The imagery in your words, though, is vividly real, and I love how you tie into Twinkling Lucidity (the reference to the plane; not sure if it was intentional, but it felt that way). Great stuff! 🙂
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January 12th, 2012 at 9:06 am
Thanks Timotheous! I haven’t been doing much recently either. Just trying to get 2012 off to a good start. Take care man!
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January 10th, 2012 at 12:31 am
Hi!
I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger award. You know how I feel about your blog so no need boring you with praises 😀 . Please click on my link in order to accept the nomination…. if you want to that is.
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January 12th, 2012 at 8:51 am
:O another nomination!? Wow! Thanks so much FK. Loving your work always, as you know 🙂
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January 11th, 2012 at 3:38 pm
Whoa !
^__^ #
Hey , Happy 2012 !
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January 12th, 2012 at 8:50 am
😀
Happy 2012 to you too!!
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January 12th, 2012 at 8:12 am
woowww Scott!! you out do yourself each time!! so beautiful and the pictures that you use of this very beautiful girl are captivating.. :-).. who is this beauty?
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January 12th, 2012 at 8:18 am
Thanks Abi. The opinion of an awesome writer is greatly appreciated. The girl is just a model friend that allows me to use her photos here. I like finding a picture that matches the poem and combining her art with mine. (good marketing :D)
Take care
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January 12th, 2012 at 2:23 pm
Hi Scott! Man, between you and Abi and a couple of other people, I have been on an emotional ride today, :)! Fabulous poem, I really like it a lot. hugs, smiles and blessings, Terri
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January 18th, 2012 at 11:28 pm
Hi Scott. Fabulous. Extremely fabulous.
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February 2nd, 2012 at 1:18 pm
Wow….so very intimate…..bravo, well done, I loved it!
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