A once inspired soul
clenching
Pulling back all hopes
excruciating consent
Never again
to believe
~
But, your splendor and smile
all that you are inside
It’s original and it’s more
than I’ve had before
~
Can you keep faith
as our souls bathe
In a vast green sea
of hopeful mystery
Motivated passion
looming behind my eyes
~
Previous cautions
I depart from now
Toss all cares
to the morning breeze
Exit the shallow
into the deep
Into boundless surety
~
Your vibrant mind arouses
me to love you more
Our inspired art we make
unique shades of paint
More than a treasure to hold
an alliance never old
~
Like a great adventure
my desires exploring softly
An exquisite body
you’ve given to me
Your pleasant embrace
inwardly as we love
A tonic for my desire
as I release what you inspire
A pinnacle conclusion
hearing you breathe
~
Moments of shared laughs
are remedy for my needs, but
my greatest lust achieved
the moment before we sleep
Heads rested on plush clouds
eyes gaze into allied dreams
Thanking each other
with endearing grins
~
~
Scott Mitchell
October 2, 2011
October 2nd, 2011 at 4:43 pm
thats a beautiful, sweet love poem. thanks for sharing.
October 2nd, 2011 at 5:53 pm
i just love this poem is to good really…
October 3rd, 2011 at 8:40 am
you know the
temperature has
finally dipped
in the apartment
when honey
comes
slowly, taking
the entire morning
to explore
each curvature
along the way
to sweetening
your tongue
.
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October 7th, 2011 at 5:20 pm
Very nice!
October 3rd, 2011 at 11:31 pm
A really lovely piece! It epitomised what love is for me.
October 4th, 2011 at 10:07 am
Thanks all. I re-wrote this poem to better reveal the inspired deep feelings. I mistakenly posted before absorbing the written thoughts for better expression. Please read again and comment if you want.
October 4th, 2011 at 3:28 pm
Another winner Scott, keep up the good work!
October 4th, 2011 at 6:38 pm
I see your lovingness in your work. Rumi opened my eyes to the Love of the ineffable. I try to open eyes of those who have lost their way in this existence. Thank you for the Like response
October 4th, 2011 at 9:57 pm
Wow! I have to say Scott, this is really moving. It gives my feelings hope to encounter what you have expressed perfectly here.
October 4th, 2011 at 11:20 pm
“passion looming behind my eyes . . . your vibrant mind arouses me to love you more . . . a tonic for my desire” Very, very nice, isn’t it?
October 5th, 2011 at 9:59 am
Love this poem. Beautiful!! You should never stop writing pieces like this, pls. He-he.
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October 5th, 2011 at 3:29 pm
Wonderful poetry! I look forward to reading more!
October 5th, 2011 at 11:07 pm
This is brilliant and mouth watering
October 6th, 2011 at 4:38 am
Lovely, all about this special feeling we have for the other person
October 7th, 2011 at 5:22 pm
Very nicely representation of emotion. Great line: “excruciating consent”
October 8th, 2011 at 8:45 pm
This is really beautiful and very moving. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
October 11th, 2011 at 8:36 pm
thanks so much for liking two of those posts! It means a lot to know there’s some readers out there
Melissa
October 12th, 2011 at 1:49 pm
This is truly profound, love the read.